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One Trip and No Return

One day Sydney and I went on a vacation to Mexico and we wanted to go to the Rea Gallery. It was a cold breezy Saturday afternoon when ever thing went wrong no one knows what had happened. We go to the gallery and Sydney said “can we see the painting called the head” “sure why not” I replied. When we got to The Head Sydney was looking at the picture and I went to get a bottle of water and I come back and Sydney says “GRACE COME HERE”! I ran to Sydney and I said “What happened”. We tried to run but the picture started pulling us before we could get out of there but we pulled away from it and the arm started to stretch and it pulled us back in and Sydney started to hit the hand. It was a crazy moment then we didn’t think it would follow us so the picture started to chase us all over the gallery. I was behind the picture feeling nervous I pushed the picture to the floor then Sydney ran off then a loud crash sound from a few feet away IT WAS SYDNEY! She went on top of the picture pelting it to the floor for it to stop chasing us. After that it didn’t get up to follow us so we ran so fast that we couldn’t stop. We were really frightened and we felt like someone was fallowing we couldn’t understand what was happening so we hid under the cover. After a while we started talking “how was it possible that the picture started to chase us around” Sydney said “I’m not really sure how it’s possible but I think that the picture is hunted” I responded “ but if we were the only ones that could see what was happing how could anyone help us?” Sydney questioned. “Sydney, think this is something we have to face on are own” I said to Sydney. “Hum I’m not really sure about that” Sydney said with a worried look on her face. “Sydney we have to it the only way we can get it to leave us alone” I responded. “But, but” Sydney said “but what?” I said worried. Sydney said “ok fine lets go” . After an hour no one heard anything about us anymore.

Please Don’t Go!

Dear Emily’s parents,

I would like to try to convince you to let Emily stay instead of moving. One of the reason is Emily is great at everything and things wouldn’t be the same without her. If I need help she is the first person that I go to. Also when someone is sad she can bring a smile to their face. I don’t want her to move because she is a great person to be around and if she left nothing would be the same. Emily is kind, smart, and fun to be around. I really like being by her because if I feel sad I know I can count on her. All her friends would miss her and we would be lonely. If she leaves nothing would be the same with out her. If she leaves I won’t have anyone to be around Emily is a very important person to me she is my best friend and I really don’t want her to leave. Emily has really been a great friend and I would miss her lots just like all her other friends. She is very special to me and I can’t stand her leaving. She is like my sister, she makes me laugh and she helps me in school when I am being dumb and I can’t figure out the answer.

I really don’t want her to leave because she is my friend and if she isn’t here than that is one less person I can hang out with. She is my BFFTLAD and I will really, really miss her! Please let her stay if it is out of the picture than at least let her come back for high school than!
Sincerely,
Grace

Dogs and Cats

The two animals I’m going to compare and contrast are dogs and cats. They are different in a lot of ways. Dogs can swim and they like to swim to on the other hand cats don’t like to swim they don’t like to get wet. Dogs are also playful and fun but cats are lazy they just lie down and sleep. Another difference is that dogs talk by barking unlike cats they meow or purr. Cats like to chase mice on the other hand dogs like to chase cats. Cats get scared of dogs because dogs like to chase cats. Another difference is that dogs and cats come in different size and color.

The two animals have a couple of similarities. For example cats and dogs are both animals.  Dogs and cats are also mammals. Dogs and cats have fur on them that’s what keep them warm. Cats and dogs both have paws and on there paws they have claws. Cats and dogs are related to different animals like dogs are related to wolves and cats are related to tigers. Some dogs are pets that are inside pet same with cats they are mostly inside pets. Cats and dogs both have ears, a tail, a mouth, and a nose. Another thing they have in common is they both like to chase different things.

 

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Grace
16200 Kill Creek Rd.
Gardner, KS

Dear Gordon Korman,

Hi my name is Grace and I would like to ask you if I could interview you on your new book swindle zoobreak and your last book swindle. I’m writing this letter to you because my class is writing a letter request and I thought it would be cool to do a famous book writer.
I would love to know what inspired you to write the books. It would also be great if you could come to my school so I could interview. I would also like to know what made you start writing books. How did you get the idea of writing swindle? I would also like to know how you started to write the books. I also wrote this paper on you because Swindle is my favorite book.
Thank you for your time and I hope you can come to my school thank you.
Sincerely,
Grace
ferrellj@usd231.com

Grace Conference Presentation

Twin Day

It was a sprit week in school on Wednesday it would be twin day. My best friend and I were thinking of doing twin day together. After we were partners we had no idea what the plan was decided to make T-shirts. So on Sunday Alexa’s mom and Alexa came to my house so we can go to Alexa’s house to see what we are going to do. After we decided to make the T-shirts we went to the store to buy the T-shirts and the letters. After we bought the letters and the T-shirts we when to the mall to buy other stuff. Next we when to Alexa’s house to make the shirts first we would take the letters that we wanted on each shirt the Alexa’s mom was helping by putting the letters on the shirts then we put stars on the corner of the letters. Then we did do the same thing to the other shirt then we would let it dry for a while. Alexa and I went to Alexa’s room to see how else we would be twins. After we were done with the t-shirts Alexa and Alexa’s mom dropped me off at my house and I would have to go home with Alexa the next day to finish the shirts. The next day was Monday and school was over and Alexa and I went to her house to finish the shirts so first we had a snack then we when to Alexa’s basement were her mom was. Then we went outside to put the glitter on the shirts. Then we let the shirts dry outside. Then we were all done. Alexa and I had a great time making the shirts. I was the best time I spent with my best friend. We look amazing on Wednesday! I will never forget making the shirts with my best friend.

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My trip to Virginia Beach

My trip to Virginia Beach was amazing. My mom, my brother, and I were going to Maryland to visit my aunt. So the plan was to go to Virginia Beach in two weeks after we got there. It took about four hours just to get there. After we got there we were looking for a hotel to stay at. We found one that was closest to the beach so we got the hotel that had the beach right behind the hotel. After we got in our room we got dressed to go to the beach.

 

            What I would see on the beach is a lot of people, towels, waves, and sand. All I could hear is the sounds of the waves falling and people but that all I can hear. The water of the water smelled like salt water. When I got in the water some of the salt water got in my mouth so it wasn’t very tasty. Then when I first got in the water it was really cold. I was very happy to be at the beach with my family. It was a summer I would never forget.

 

 

Then we would go back to the hotel and then we would go look for a place to eat hen we would walk along the beach and see the waves and there would be people sing around the corner the sounds of the waves was a very pretty sound. Next we would walk back to the hotel and wait for the next day to go to the beach again.

 

            Finally it was the last day of the week to stay at the beach .Then we when back to Maryland.  This was one of the summers I would never forget. It was the best vacation ever. I loved going to the beach. My trip to Virginia Beach I would like to go back next year.

Brian’s Winter

1.        Why was Brian nervous about the coming of winter?

He is nervous because the coming of winter means that plants die and animals hybernate. Brian gets his food from the berry bushes and when those die he will be out of berries until summer. The animals could blend in the snow and it would be harder to catch animals. Also, he doesn’t have very many clothes that keep him warm. Brian could die in the winter so that is why he is nervous. 

 
2.       If Betty hadn’t come to Brian’s rescue during the bear’s visit, what might have happened?

If Betty hadn’t come the Bear would of ate Brian. Brian would of died! But luckly Betty came and saved him.When Betty came she was just coming for the food but she is Brian’s friend she decided to help him. If Brian had lived, he would be badly injured and probably would not be able to move. Also, he wouldn’t have enough food to live on for the whole winter and would starve to death.

 

3.       Based on what you know about the outdoors, do the events in this story seem believable?  Explain.The events seem very believable. The outdoors are very beautiful but can be very scary. Many people die out in the woods. Bears, wolves, and other lethal animals lurk in the shadows of the trees. Any book that takes place in the woods or outdoors is most likely to have realistic events.

 
 
4.       What theme does the relationship between Brian and Betty suggest?

The theme is that Your friends will always be there for you no matter what happens. Having a friend like that is a great thing. Most friends you have at a younger age are flighty and don’t really care about what you do or what you like. Friendship is very powerful and lead you through life better than anything else. 

 

5.       Write a paragraph that describes what Brian’s actions in the wilderness reveal about his character.  Use details from the story to support your answer.Brian is very determined to reach his goal of survival. He does everything he can to survive. Being in the woods for a long part of the year does change a person and can really impact their character. Before, Brian was probably lazy and didn’t even think about what would happen if he got put in the situation he is now.

The Sumerians

Introduction
    Sumer is part of the civilization we call Mesopotamia. It is located in modern day Iraq in between the Tigris and Euphrates rivers. Sumer used to be called Babylon and was home the first written set of laws made my King Hammurabi and King Nebuchadnezzar’s Hanging Gardens. The area consists of the city-states Kish, Laggash, and many more. They were the most powerful Sumerian city-states. Sumer, as a whole was an amazing place, full of inventions and historic monuments. 
Orgin of the Sumerians
    The Sumerians go way back before Mesopotamia had even began. Before, they would travel all across Asia looking for food. When Mesopotamia first began and was growing, it used to be called Babylon. In Babylon, the Sumerian city-states consisted of Kish, Lagash, Umma, Ur, and Uruk. Those were the most powerful city-states in Babylon and they conquered many littler city-states. The city-states each had their own god, too. Sumerians believed that the gods would bring them good fortune if they sacrificed food and their possesions for them.
    King Hammurabi ruled for a long period of time in Babylon, which is old Sumer. During his reign, he created a huge stele with the first set of written laws. Also, King Nebuchadnazzar had The Hanging Gardens built for his wife. It later became of the seven wonders of the world.
 
Babylon
    Sumer used to be called Babylon. In Babylon, a great many things happened. The most important things was Hammurabi’s Code and the Hanging Gardens. Hammurabi’s Code was very important because it was the very first written set of laws. The Hanging Gardens were a huge part of Babylon, too. They were built for a King Nebuchadnezzar’s wife in 600 BCE. So those are two big things that were found in the city of Babylon.
    Hammurabi’s Code was the first written set of laws. Before Hammurabi’s Code, government officials would go around telling people the laws by mouth. That could create problems people could keep making up laws and then it would be impossible to live and remember them all. So, in 1792 BCE, King Hammurabi of Babylon made a 7 1/2 foot cone stele. On this stele, there were hundreds of laws and punishments for breaking the law. This stele was discovered in 1901 by Jean-Vincent Scheil, a french archaeologist. It was an amazing discovery.
    Another amazing part of Babylon were The Hanging Gardens. They were made around 600 BCE. They were built for King Nebuchadnezzar’s wife. She was homesick for previous home in the mountains. So, Nebuchadnezzar built a huge garden of hanging green plants. It was one of the Seven Wonders of the World. The Hanging Gardens became a huge part of Babylon’s history and for King Nebuchadnazzar himself.
 
Religion
    All the people in Mesopotamia believed in mutiple gods. However, each city-state had their own god that they believed to rule the city-state. Sumerians believed in an air god, earth god, sky god, and heaven god. They were believed to live in the top room of the holy temple. All Sumerians called them ziggurats. They had many levels and were home to preists, scribes, and the government rulers.
    The key gods of the Sumerians were the god of earth, the god of water, the god of wind, and the god of the heavens. Sumerians gave offerings to the gods in hopes that they would be happy and give them good fortune. One god was often believed to be the king of one or two city-states. The gods were in total control of the Sumerians and the city-states.
    The temple which the god lived in was called a ziggurat. It was a multi-level building with homes for the preists, scribes, and government officials. On the top level, there was one room which the Sumerians believed to be their god’s home. The ziggurat was located in the middle of the city-state. The constrution of a ziggurat took a long time. It took many workers and slaves. Ziggurats were very important to the Sumerians and all of the Mesopotamians.
Daily Life
    Daily life in Sumer was quite difficult. They had to control the floods of the Tigris and Euphrates rivers, but they didn’t ever know when it was going to flood. Their irrigation system was complicated, as well. Also, jobs in Sumer were amazing but little pay came in return. The women of Sumer had to do all the chores of the house and keep the family together while the men had the rights of doing real jobs. One very cool job the Sumerians had a choice of was crafting sculptures of their gods.
    The Tigris and Euphrates rivers flooded all the time without knowledge of it coming. It often happened when the Sumerians just planted seeds for new crops and the rivers would wash away the seeds. But they used the canals and levees to control the amount of water their crops got. They would pull the levees up when they needed more water, then put it down when the crops had enough. Their irrigation system helped them a lot with growing crops.
    There were limited jobs in Ancient Sumer. The men of Sumer could be preists, work for the king, be scribes, or be farmers. You could be a slave, too, but you wouldn’t be paid and would not have as many rights as the free people. The women of Sumer were in charge of the normal house chores. They would do the cleaning, the cooking, and be in charge of making sure the children were safe. Women did not have all the rights men did. They could be shopowners, however. But, that was the main job for women in ancient Sumer.
 
Inventions
    The Sumerians invented a lot of interesting things that we use to this day. Sumerians invent the wheel, their own type of calender, and the first system of writing called cuneiform.The wheel helped them with farming and irrigation. When the Tigris and Euphrates rivers flood, preists were able to keep track of it by using a calendar based on the stars. Most of all, their writing helped them commuicate and keep records of important information.
 
    The wheel was the most important invention the Sumerians created. It help them with transportation, irrigation,and daily living.They created the wheel in 8000 B.C. and is a circle with a stick of some sort going through it. The first wheel the Sumerians invented was made of wood. The wheel helped them with their farming and irrigation. The wheel helped them with transportation, too. It has helped us with a lot of things like transportation today and it’s used on cars, airplanes, tranes, and any kind of things that has wheels.The wheel improved over the years, and now it is very important in our lives.That’s why the wheel is the most important invention the Sumerians.
    Another invention that the Sumerians invented was the calendar.The preists helped create the calendar. The preists kept track of the stars’ movement and then wrote the stars’ patterns down with the correlating events. While keeping track of these events, they were able to create a calendar based on the stars and the constellations. It took a huge amount of intelligence and time to create something like a calendar. 
    The other thing the Sumeriains invented was cuneiform.The cuneirform was an important part of there history.There are more than six hunderd cuneiform signs. Cuneform consists of the different writing systems logophonetic, consonantal alphabetic, and syllabic systems. Each of the encompass lines and wedges in their wirting. It took a very long time to learn how to write cuneiform. Scribes used cuneiform to send messages from the king to the people. Cuneiform was very important in the history of Sumer. 
Conclusion
So, as you can see, the Sumerians were amazing people. They invented amazing items we still use, they had an amzing writing system, and created a very intelligent calendar. In the history, Sumer used to be called Babylon. In Babylon, the first set of written laws were created and The Hanging Gardens, one of the Seven Wonders of the World. All in all, the ancient Sumerians were amazing and are still very well remembered to this day.
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The Case of the Filched Feast Funds